Day-1 Gratitude Journal
It’s when my parents hug me. When I feel not secure, need protection or even feel sad, I normally look somebody to hug to make myself feel safe and secure. And there’s always my parents there ready to hug me anytime. The hug they give make me feel that I am under protection and calm me down especially when I am shivering or feeling nervous. Sometimes the feel not same with other than my parents.
📝 AI Tutor Comments:
1. Comment: Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt reflection on the comfort and safety you find in your parents’ hugs. It’s clear that these moments of physical affection provide you with a deep sense of security and calm during challenging times. Your description of how their hugs help you feel protected and less anxious is very relatable and speaks to the powerful bond between you and your parents. It’s wonderful that you have such a strong source of comfort in your life.
2. Improvement Suggestions: Your entry beautifully conveys the emotions tied to your parents’ hugs, but there are a few areas where clarity could enhance your message. For instance, you might consider rephrasing “the feel not same with other than my parents” to express how their hugs differ from those of others in a clearer way. Additionally, a few minor grammatical adjustments could improve the flow of your writing. For example, “When I feel not secure” could be rephrased to “When I don’t feel secure.”
What do you think it is about your parents’ hugs that makes them feel different from others?